Monday, February 27, 2006

Clean sweep

Venu came early today. 45 mins earlier as usual.
Today college was opened after 3 months of semester holidays. He looked convinced as he was wearing the new dress that he was preserving for days.Maroon shirt and brown pant.

Looked at the college road.It was overspread with lemon yellow colored flowers.
Lovely to watch.Venu had a agaze look at it.

All the students were walking after the long day classes.Venu sat on the near by bench looking at them going.

He saw four girls walking all over the road.Shouting and gigling.
All the four girls were lookin gorgeous ofcourse. They were after a guy who looked feared for them.He was in white shirt and black pant.

Venu looked at those girls.He was able to hear them speaking to that guy.

"Dai entha department da ni" said the girl in green salwar to the guy.
The guy replied "Mechanical akka".
"What..Yaaruda akka..seniornu sollu" shouted the green salwar.
Then came in the girl in red top.
"athu enna da specs..bus mirror madhari." Every one laughed out.

It was getting interesting for Venu.Of the four girls venu liked the one wearing black salwar.
She was fair.For venu she looked homely and he had a short prayer that he should get a wife like her.

Black salwar came in front of that white dressed guy and said to other girls..
"Chi pavam di payan..irunga..evalo smarta irukan."
She said looking at the guy.."Dai machan".
That guy exclaimed "Machanaaa..sister!! sorry grr err madam..i mean senior.Please dont call me like that"
The black salwar said "Seri da soda butti..ennoda lips paru da.Dont you feel like kissing this".

Venu stood up stunned.He immediately learnt that appearance deceive.And cancelled the prayer he had a shortwhile ago.
Black one continued "Okay da soda butti.." and she pointed out a broom stick at a distance and said "If you sweep this place with that broom.I shall kiss you."

This is getting hot.
Venu looked.

That white dressed guy perspired.He wavered.
The girl in red top commanded
"Dai are u going to do this now or not". That guy immediately ran and picked the broom.

Lot of students gathered around soon.
Black salwar announced the deal to the gathering. One guy in the crowd shouted.."Oye pavithra nan venumna intha city fulla clean panrain di..ni kiss panrathuku intha dubbuku than unnaku kedachana".
Pavithra replied "Roomba alayatha da".

Venu was eagerly waiting to see the climax. Then suddenly the white dressed guy started crying loud.
Pavithra said "dai dai ennada azhara.niruthu da".
Green slawar said "chi pavam di roomba azharan"
Red tops said"amman avan soda buttila la wipers vera illa".
Pavithra said "Seri seri di vanga polam, dean kita matinumna avalo than.Ippolam raging panna 5 yrs kambi ennanum theriyuma"

Everyone vanished from the scene in a second.

Venu stood up and saw the whole road was void of ppl.He went near the broom and smiled.
Bended down to pick it up.His ID card fell down from his front pocket which read,

Name:Venu, Catergory : Non-Teaching , Type:Sweeper

That broom,
was an instrument of fun for them.For Venu its a device that keeps up his existence around.

He looked the Sky above and said "Are u biased".
A sinlge lemon yellow colored flower fell from the tree slowly on to his face and landed on to the road.

He looked at the flower down and started sweeping.

19 comments:

Kavitha Jay said...

awww...ore touchings um feelings a pochi..nice ending..:)..thank god there is no one here to rag me like this..illana nan gaalli..

neighbour said...

yenyaaa yellarum room pootu yosipeengaloo.... bulb kodukaradhuku...

ragging:- if this happend without horrifying harrasment.. that is the most enjoyable part.

neenga sollaradhu unmai thaan ponnugakita raggingla maatikitom chumma veluthu vaangiduvaanga..

Nice story and nice ending..

Kirukal said...

Unexpected ending!!! Ragging remined me of college days...have been ragged and have ragged!!

BZ said...

Very nice!!
Really liked it! :)

che sara sara said...

wow beautiful...
logic yaar...hats off

dakaltiz said...

A different da logic ..never expected this ending...very nice and Thought provokin 1...

KC! said...

"Are you biased?" Idhu sweeping-ka kiss-ka illa education-ka? Adhai mattum solungalen pls, coz it can be interpreted in several ways..

kuttichuvaru said...

ennanga ithu, kathai ellam romba yosikkara maathiri irukke.... ore twist-ah irukku.... but, was gud...

Shilpa said...

Logic,

Very nice story...the end is superb.

U made a valid point...apperance can be deceptive...

logic said...

@mystery:
so raging la iruntha thapichita..iru iru..
@babu:
ya ya u r right..matinomm avalothan
@kirukal:
thanx yaar..nalla exp pola iruku..
@sk:
thanx and howz life.
@sophie:
thanx yaar.
@dakalti:
hmm i know u will like this very much..wat happened update u r page man..
@kuttichuvaru:
roomba yoshikathinga kutti..
@shilpa:
hey..u got that line..thanx yaar..

logic said...

@usha:
hmm usha..good question?
hmm..the difference in living style and the deeds exhibited by humans created by the almighty.

Anonymous said...

Logic..
Did this happen to you?
It was good reading

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Zaradin said...

really liked this one..
having an editor of a magazine as a mother is the result of my finding grammatical and spelling mistakes!
Sorry if I offended you

shree said...

oye, andha ponnu yenna vasool rajava yenna.. sweep pannaravangala yellam katti pudi vaidhyam pannarathukku??

rombo dhan ponnungala otti irukkengapa.. nan yen collegela indha rangeukkellam ragging pannadhilla.

but a very different story.

vishy said...

logic,
nice story.. unfortunately the current generations have missed the fun of ragging..

logic said...

@parvati:
thanx for the comments..no offence.
Happi if u got the story the way i wanted to present.
@shree:
I think you misunderstood the plot.Acutally there two characters one Venu who is the sweeper and one college junior student(whom i have been refering to as "White dressed guy").If u have time pls read it again though.

@vishy:
yes true..somewhat moderate ragging was fun..its sad that u missed it.

nandoo said...

logic... romba logicaa oru katha sollikeerapaa... touch pannta po!!!
naan kooda nenaipen.. intha manusanku love a vitta vera topicae kedaikaathaanu... kelapitaa maamu...

mavale antha pavithra mattum en collegela irunthu irukkanum.. :D
nadakrathe veraaa.. naan first yearlaye.. final year ponnungala kaalaichavan.. :D

Anonymous said...

hey well written