Monday, March 06, 2006

honey MOON

"Nimmi come here di.Come near me seekaram".
He showed her the marvel he was seeing.Nirmala who was preparing coffee rushed and stood near dina.
"Did u see that" he said and showed her the Moon.

"Thats amazing da wow" she slowly leaned over Dina and looked at it.
White and milky it was.They felt cold looking at it.

She turned and gave a tight hug to dina and eventually he kissed her forehead.
Tears started rolling out of her eyes.

"i know abt u dear..u will keep up your promise" said Nirmala and kissed him deeply. As their shuttle approched it.

He felt proud.

Dina remembered a few years back "Nimmi.I promise u da." pointing to the moon over the sky "For sure i shall take you there for our honey moon sweetheart".

And he registered their names with VMCI (Visit Moon Corporation of India) and got the best deal "Exclusive for couples" of 4 nights stay plus a new space shuttle which hardly had travelled 150 times between moon and earth, with all the elemental features for 33 million Rs.

He did'nt yet disclose to Nirmala that he had got a free ride coupon on the "old highlands".

Their space craft was above to land on the moon surface in another 8 hrs.They saw the surface that was covered with regolith, a mixture of fine dust and rocky debris produced by meteor impacts.

It landed.

The couple came out and a crew with four men were waiting to pick them up to their suite.

"Welcome sir, and mam.You are on the moon.You are 43215633 th couple to visit the moon. The weather is excellent this weekend.And we hope you will enjoy your stay here for the next 5 days."

Nirmala cant believe that she is walking on the moon with his beloved.
With no atmosphere and no magnetic field, the Moon's surface looked providential for her.

She held his hand tight when they looked above the sky to see the EARTH at an orbit 384,400 km away.

16 comments:

Kavitha Jay said...

dai..romba over a irruka pa...but i am pretty sure this is going to happen in the future..hehe....and i will remember about this article..:))...

neighbour said...

ennapa naanga yellam kaadhula poo vachukitu irukomaaa ennaaa...

un karpaniku oru alavae illaiyaapaaa...

BZ said...

Nice imagination :)

Known Stranger said...

thank god the couples didnt search to find a " honey " moon for their honey moon.

Shilpa said...

Hmm...not impossible...but I find it hard to beleive that so many people could afford to go to the moon...

and did Nirmala actually WALK on the moon...I would imagine them hopping :-)

Kirukal said...

And the cow jumped over the moon!!!!
That's how your imagination has rocketed....I like all the little details in this post (VMCI, 343215633etc) ...makes it sound real!!!
Hope this happens one day....

kuttichuvaru said...

karpanai valam romba jaasthiyaa irukku pola irukku!! namma ooru maathiri Tea kadai ellam irukkumaa??

logic said...

All,
thanx for all u r comments.
Yeah it sounds unrealistic right!!!

When u sit with your beloved in the beach shore on a friday evening full moon day..talking with her/him looking at the moon.
U wud have felt that moment so tender,calm and lovely.God i miss those moments.

No one wud have ever imagined going to the moon with her/him.I had imagined this once.(didnt tell her though) while we were on the beach.
Actually considering moon to be a dream land as it appears to us from here ignoring all the astronomic theories.

@mystery :
so u r sure that this will happen..so u kids schooling anga thana
@neighbour:
ennpa kasa panama karpanai summa freeya valiyuthu
@sk thanx
@veda:
send in u r details mam will register it now.
@kirukals:
great that u got those little details on the post..
@ks:
adutha blog HONEY moon hehehehe
@shilpa:
Might have some artificial gravity built..wat say
@ammu:
thanx.title suite achunu feel panain illaya.
@kutti:
hahaha..tea kada illamaya..saravana bhavan kuda irukapa..unnaku oru ticket sollava..cheapu than

shree said...

good fiction. sujatha (writer) padicharuna sandhoshapaduvar

dakaltiz said...

Logic Machi..

Is this possible or not is not the question here?

Its all about the intensity of the love you have on your beloved .... All lovers dream dreams...and Urs is a ultimatum..

Wishing u that you live this very dream of yours !!

Hope U'll remember me when u r on the moon ;)

che sara sara said...

tat was cool imagination

Ponnarasi Kothandaraman said...

Ayooo...Ipadiyum karpanaya???? Wondering where am ;) Mooooon or earth ...:P

I came here while I was browsing through...Nice post..

vishy said...

Hello.. yaar venum nalum yaava venum nalum kootitu Nilavukku ponga..

but thirumbi varumbothu.. marakkama andha "pati" oda kadailenthu enakku konjam "vadai" mattum vangitu vanga!!!

Known Stranger said...

there are lot of killings and murder with no law and rule to even follow - the worst to mention is killing your dream even b4 it gets the form. even thatz an abortion.

relate the word life in my poem with friendship, relation, love, care, and what not.. you will find a more abortion around us ever where

KC! said...

^$(*$!(*$&*&$$^£"!$T&*"!&"!)(*£)("*£"!$("!^

ippodhan kaalaila Space Odyssey 2010 mudichen train-la...ippo thirumba Moon, Jupiter-na kaduppaa varudhu!!!

Seri j/k..nalla karpanai, namma future generations should hopefully do this.

logic said...

poonrasi:
welcome here.You have a good page.
Vishy:
Medhu vadiya illa masal vadaya.
usha:kadupukku nanri