Tomorrow is the day.All the fun and friends will come to a halt. The last day in their college.
Chennai Marina beach 5:30 PM
Shruti was holding her churidhar pants lil up and feeling the planing water.Her lily-white feet perked up the waves. They mildly washed her beautiful feet, embellished with the glittering silver chain(kolosu).
Shruti turned back and said "Roshni.Will he have the same thoughts"
"Kandipa.And look here baby,this is the last chance for u di"
"Illa..he seems like he is treating me as his close friend.Avalothan" said Shruti
Few feets away to the boys,
"Am i not your Close friend" questioned Rupen
"Enna da kelvi " replied Surya
"You are proposing to her Machan.I bet she loves you much"
Surya "Dai.Am afraid.I dont want to do any thing stupid and break away our 4 Yrs friendship.Am clear and no deviation from my decision"
Back to the girls,
"Stupid.I am stupid.I cant bear this pain di.I should have told him way before.Ippo at the end.I cant" suffered Shruti.
Roshni said "Come-on dear.There is nothing called end."
"Illa.Lets stop this here.Period." replied Shruti firmly this time.
She wiped her tears and whispered "Shhsh they are coming"
Rupen "Okie girls lets start, its getting late"
Shruti picked up her slippers in hand and walked with Roshni.The guys followed at a distance.
"Oouch"shouted Shruti and sat down holding her leg.
Surya ran towards her and held her leg,placed over his fore arm.Her soft,tender foot skin was harshly punctured by a evil shell piece.
He slowly removed it off her feet and blood started to ooze out.He then tied her foot with his hankey and said
"Onnum illada..everything will be alright..luv u so much dear"
Silence.He said it but he never realized he said that.Shruti looked at him.
Roshni and Rupen looked astound.
Shruti broke the silence and said"Why dont you carry me home dear"
Surya said "Not now baby.Athellam after our marriage".
Turned up and said "Roshni drop my fiance at home."
Roshni said "Oh Ok sir.May i ask you guys a question,how long you both were in love"
They looked each other and smiled.
Shruti "Bye dear.Call pannu da chellam"
Roshni madly said "Seri pothum vadi."
Shruti said "Enn alu kita naan pesuvain.Whats heating you up"
Roshni stared at her and both left the place laughing at each other as they walked.
Rupen looked at Surya and said "whats happening machan"
Suray said "I felt the pain da.Seriously you wont belive.It was prevailing between us and cant resist it"
Surya raised the shell piece and said looking at it,
"You pierced my heart through her feet and oozed out my deep love on her through her feet."
PS: Scripted as per people request of happy endings.
Chennai Marina beach 5:30 PM
Shruti was holding her churidhar pants lil up and feeling the planing water.Her lily-white feet perked up the waves. They mildly washed her beautiful feet, embellished with the glittering silver chain(kolosu).
Shruti turned back and said "Roshni.Will he have the same thoughts"
"Kandipa.And look here baby,this is the last chance for u di"
"Illa..he seems like he is treating me as his close friend.Avalothan" said Shruti
Few feets away to the boys,
"Am i not your Close friend" questioned Rupen
"Enna da kelvi " replied Surya
"You are proposing to her Machan.I bet she loves you much"
Surya "Dai.Am afraid.I dont want to do any thing stupid and break away our 4 Yrs friendship.Am clear and no deviation from my decision"
Back to the girls,
"Stupid.I am stupid.I cant bear this pain di.I should have told him way before.Ippo at the end.I cant" suffered Shruti.
Roshni said "Come-on dear.There is nothing called end."
"Illa.Lets stop this here.Period." replied Shruti firmly this time.
She wiped her tears and whispered "Shhsh they are coming"
Rupen "Okie girls lets start, its getting late"
Shruti picked up her slippers in hand and walked with Roshni.The guys followed at a distance.
"Oouch"shouted Shruti and sat down holding her leg.
Surya ran towards her and held her leg,placed over his fore arm.Her soft,tender foot skin was harshly punctured by a evil shell piece.
He slowly removed it off her feet and blood started to ooze out.He then tied her foot with his hankey and said
"Onnum illada..everything will be alright..luv u so much dear"
Silence.He said it but he never realized he said that.Shruti looked at him.
Roshni and Rupen looked astound.
Shruti broke the silence and said"Why dont you carry me home dear"
Surya said "Not now baby.Athellam after our marriage".
Turned up and said "Roshni drop my fiance at home."
Roshni said "Oh Ok sir.May i ask you guys a question,how long you both were in love"
They looked each other and smiled.
Shruti "Bye dear.Call pannu da chellam"
Roshni madly said "Seri pothum vadi."
Shruti said "Enn alu kita naan pesuvain.Whats heating you up"
Roshni stared at her and both left the place laughing at each other as they walked.
Rupen looked at Surya and said "whats happening machan"
Suray said "I felt the pain da.Seriously you wont belive.It was prevailing between us and cant resist it"
Surya raised the shell piece and said looking at it,
"You pierced my heart through her feet and oozed out my deep love on her through her feet."
PS: Scripted as per people request of happy endings.
20 comments:
Beautifully scripted da...Simple and yet too good!
But machaan... Roshini Rupen rendu peraiyum ipdi kena pasanga aakitaangale da ;))
epdi da ipdi laa ezhuthra...? awesome 1 da...read it a second time.... ;))U rock!
machi super .. aappa... eppadi ..ithuellam.. ineme kaila oru mul chediyoda ella pasangalum alyaporanga..
Chance ila..kalakiteenga.its so beautiful!!! u're too good at wrting stories..hats off!!
but jus one question had it not been a happy ending..would u make a triangle love story outta it?
p.s have blogrolled u
simple yet powerful...The characters were very well portrayed...but it looked it all happened so fast..innum konjum describe panni irrukalam illa?
dakalti romba varutha padran..roshni ya avannuku connect panni vittudu..:P
@dakalz:
MAchi thanks da..rendu comment from hurray mammu
@Vishy:
Danks machi..mul chediya pathu da..athalaya adi vanga pora
@Krithika:
Thanks.Hmm ppl said i have alwyas sentimental write ups and not good jolly humourous stories happening..athan oru try
@mystery:
Assitant Ekka ninga sonna correct than..U r right kavi the pace swallowed lot of cute events..but length of th post also maters right
@Raz:
Ozhunga exam pass panu.Fal agi tholayatha
kalakiteenga .. but y orae oru feelings oda niruthiteeng a... oru maalai .. nearangal'a thavara .. innnum pala naatkal coincidence'um sethu sollunga ..
..that was wonderful !!! ..
seri ok but u haven visited my blog..na oru super senti kadi ezhutheerkaen..vandu padinga
@Mystery
@Raz
Rendu perum adanga maateengala...naane onnum sikka maatutheenu varthathula irukean.. ;))
ravi:
Visited u r page..Athu enna "Outright Kiss" engayo padicha madhri iruku
@Dakalti:
dai dakalti feelings kora da dai
Hey!!! very nice...felt happy reading the "happy" ending!!!
Logic, That is one sweet story.
Nice read.
Its a good narrative ! Interesting to read ! Nice read !
@Kirukal:
Thanks..and good to know u njoyed it
@Raji:
thanks much for dropping by
@Kavi:
Read u blog it was good.Thanks for the comment
bless you! for once, someone spells "shruti" the way it ought to be spelt!! :D :D
that was very sentimental, mr. logic. padadox? oxymoron?
lolz....gud one!
Ahaaaaaaaaa.... range story!!!! as usual rocking!!! :)
Hi there ! happened to chance upon ur blog.Its just awesome ..the descriptions are simply fabuluos...
Even im a die hard romatic and ur blog is like a real feast!! too good ! ur style of writing and the strong streak of simplicity is great ! good work ! cheers !
huffffffffff......I wish life was as simple as that.
Konnuta maamu.....Super.....
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