Tuesday, August 22, 2006

Train of thoughts

Heavy metal sound was rattling all over the station.People rushing from everywhere.
They knew Nellai express would stop only for 5 mins in Tambaram station.
When the extreme machine left the station it was calm again.

Senthil sat on the wooden chair looking at his mathematics notebook.His eyes were reading the phrase.

"I want to live the rest of my life on your shoulders.Will you accept me"
Luv Gayathri.

He never even dreamt in life that a girl (that too Gayathri) will fall in luv with him.
She was the topper in their class in all aspects and she is one of the so called ultimate girls in the college.

Senthil is from a very small village deep down south and somehow made to get into this Engineering college.

His village has a small raliway station which acknowledges all the express trains and only two passenger trains stops there for few mins.His father is the Lines man for that station.
His job is to check the rail spikes and force rails back into place on steep turns, correcting the gradual shifting caused by the centripetal force of passing trains.He sprays ballast with weedkiller to prevent weeds growing through and disrupting the ballast. Over time, ballast is crushed by the weight of trains passing over it, and periodically it needs to be replaced. If this is not done, the tracks become uneven.

Senthil when he was a kid he used to walk with his father along the rusted steel rails.He likes to hop from the sleeper to sleeper.He would carry the hammer for his dad and he counts the sound when his father hammers the rail spikes. He was grown with the tracks and the train sound.

Every penny that has been sent to his studies was earned by his fathers hard work on these rails.Somehow they manage to send in money every month but it is only plies enough for his hostel and food.

He manages his tuition by his part time job.

The last MRTS train was ready to leave the station.Senthil rushed for it.
The train gained speed and Senthil was standing near the entrance of it and staring at the parrallel rail track.

Daily hundreds and thousands of people travel over these rails but no one knew it required so much maintance.They sleep happily in the place allocated to them.But Senthil knows it.He knows the pain it takes to maintain them.

He cannot let his fathers hardwork dissolve in thin air.
Suddenly he tore the sheet off from his notebook and let the wind to carry it.

MRTS stopped at Chromepet.He got down went straight in to the Worksman room changed his dress and took the hammer.Senthilworks part time as contract labour for the lines man at Chromepet station.

Today he not only hammered the rail spikes but his thoughts on Gayathri as well and he hammered hard.

21 comments:

Kavitha Jay said...

WOW...super kanna...can imagine every word as you describe it....very well written...:D

dakaltiz said...

Dood..
lots a finer details in this post da..lineman's task tops it all..
but en intha sogamaana post da?

Poverty can't go with love is it?..
Is Gayathri unlucky? or is it Sethil?

prithz said...

Hey, that was an awesome post. The intricate details, that some people jus dutn know have been knitted very well into the story... (*clap clap clap*) Loved reading it...

But as dakaltiz said, i too had the same questions in mind after readin the last couple of lines... y didnt senthil want to continue wid this gal??? did he fear it mite hinder his studies??? Did he fear that his dad mite not like it???

Ravi said...

Hey happend to browse through your blog ... yeah .. it was full of ..life .... missing ppls ..love .. etc ..(wat i've experienced in the recent past .. ) ..

.. i've no idea abt the next visit to u r page ..untill i read your "FATE AND U" ..

.. your r driving me .. like sophia .. my heart beats faster .. that was wonderfull .. am not here to judge is fate ruling us or not .. its for sure .. you are !!

.. keep going ..

Krithika said...

beautiful post! i can see the practicality of the decision made.wonderful again!

Ramya Shankar said...

Wow! I really like ur stories. I visit here, but just breeze thru, dont comment. But I've read ur posts where u were home sick n missing ur girl!
Good luck for everything! :)

Unknown said...

Thank u for visiting my blog and commenting too! :)

But why shouldn't a boy from the so-called "poor" family love a girl from the so called "rich" family???

what's wrong with it?

naatamey, theerpa maathi sollu! :D

SeePearrl said...

gud one!

Has to be me said...

Wow! Tho its good...it hurts. Pavum Senthil.

Harish said...

kalakiteenga boss....
Reality bites...and it does here...

logic said...

Mystery:
i alwyas knew u will be the first one to comment in here.

Pritz and Dakaltiz and karthik B.S:

Thanks for the comments.
Its no poverty or the so called poor family stuff that made him to decide this.He is not at all groomed for such feelings now.He is very very far behind from the life of normal ppl who has got everything in life and searching for a life mate.There is no such emotions/feeligs in him to sacrifice.
I thing the last line deviated
"Today he not only hammered the rail spikes but his thoughts on Gayathri as well and he hammered hard"
from the above concept..

Ravi:
Welcome to my page dude.thanks for u comments.And njoy blogging

White forest :
Welcome to my page.Thanks.

Raz:
Ithu intentional ending illa..but try to write some feel good posts.thanks for the comment.

has to be me:
Thanks.I feel "Pavam Gayathri"

Harish:
Well said dude..REality Bites

Raji said...

Logic,

Well written.. sorry for the delay in reading your post.. has been snowed under at work in the recent past..

Pavaam Senthil and Gayathri!!!

prithz said...

Oh!!! Oki... Gotcha!!! :)

gils said...

wow..first time here..perukku ethamathir logicana story..super..somehow..happy endings seekrama maranthu poidrathu..sad endings remain etched in memory...ithu tamizhla irunthiruntha inum nalla irunthirukumo?

KC! said...

enna ippadi solomon papayya kadhai madiri mudichutenga????

Known Stranger said...

sema senti

shree said...

good one. yellarum ivlo theliva irundhanganna kadhal madhiri padam yellam varave varadhu

Sat said...

hey...nice...amidst all the mush everywhere, someone chose to write otherwise :)
and...girl speaks up about how she feels huh?; rare enough...seriously, there are verrrrry few cases when a girl confesses her love for someone!...takes courage

logic said...

Gils:
Thanks for you comments..Yes tamila irutha nalla irukum but i have som efreinds who donot tamil..so athan..globalization..

Usha:
long time...thankx for the comment

Know starnager:
appdaiya

Shree:
Thanks for dropping by..Thanks for the comments..

Sat:
Welcome..but am not able to fit your comment to my post.

RAji:
Latea vanthalom latesta comment sollirukinga

Kavi said...

Well written ! Many a time, the circumstances influence decisions ! Emotions got captured brilliantly !! First time here. Will be back !

White Magpie said...

Wullah!!this one was great too...