Movie depictions of firearm victims being thrown through plate-glass windows are inaccurate, as were this to be the case, the shooter would also be thrown backwards with equal force.
Gunshot victims frequently fall or collapse when shot; however this is usually due to physical damage or psychological effects perhaps combined with being off-balance, not the momentum of the bullet pushing them over.
Lets continue to a sampled stimulating moment........
It travelled at an unimaginable velocity.
A very high shutter speed can only capture it.But he traced it.
In a trajectory exactly pointing her left breast.
Arief shouted "Sukanya..no da".Her eyes shivered.
On target.Pierced.Blood oozed out.She did not move.
She was stading still.Not even a inch she moved from where she was standing.
The gunslinger fled the spot on time.But Arief could agnize him.
Arief rushed to Sukanya.
She said "I want to rest on your lap da".And Landed straight on to his lap.
She was bleeding all over.Arief is not ready to accept that it happened.
He having her bleeding in his lap.Rarest probable event that should never ever happen to anyone
Gunshots every where echoed.But Arief was not able to hear any of that.He stared at her.
He was Struck with fear and consternation.She lifted her and ran in among the violent crowd.
Shouted "You hardhearted creatures"
Rushed her to the nearby hospital.She was admitted to the ICU.
Three days passed.Arief cant bear the trauma that he was undergoing.Food and sleep didnt bother him.Sat on the white colored bench, only looking through the transparent circle in the ICU door which showed her face.
Nearby FM receiver annonced."The religious rioting and violence has been curtailed.And peace has been restored"
Seven days later.She woke up.
She called upon Arief in mild voice "Da.Are you ok"
"I am all fine dear.How are you feeling now".
She said "I want to rest on your lap forever da".
He said "Does it hurt too much dear"
She said "Ila vae illa da..you saw naa i was all standing firmly after that"
He immediately hugged her tightly and cant control his tears.
He saw the fear on her eyes.Fear of death.
He know him.The guy who shot her.He was his good old friend for more than a decade now.
All those barbaric instincts have blindfolded him from distinguishing his own friends girl.
A year back when Arief and Sukanya decided to marry they said "No religion we will follow.No one can seperate us".
They never knew that these practices are deeprooted that they will follow them till the end.
Or end them in between.
Gunshot victims frequently fall or collapse when shot; however this is usually due to physical damage or psychological effects perhaps combined with being off-balance, not the momentum of the bullet pushing them over.
Lets continue to a sampled stimulating moment........
It travelled at an unimaginable velocity.
A very high shutter speed can only capture it.But he traced it.
In a trajectory exactly pointing her left breast.
Arief shouted "Sukanya..no da".Her eyes shivered.
On target.Pierced.Blood oozed out.She did not move.
She was stading still.Not even a inch she moved from where she was standing.
The gunslinger fled the spot on time.But Arief could agnize him.
Arief rushed to Sukanya.
She said "I want to rest on your lap da".And Landed straight on to his lap.
She was bleeding all over.Arief is not ready to accept that it happened.
He having her bleeding in his lap.Rarest probable event that should never ever happen to anyone
Gunshots every where echoed.But Arief was not able to hear any of that.He stared at her.
He was Struck with fear and consternation.She lifted her and ran in among the violent crowd.
Shouted "You hardhearted creatures"
Rushed her to the nearby hospital.She was admitted to the ICU.
Three days passed.Arief cant bear the trauma that he was undergoing.Food and sleep didnt bother him.Sat on the white colored bench, only looking through the transparent circle in the ICU door which showed her face.
Nearby FM receiver annonced."The religious rioting and violence has been curtailed.And peace has been restored"
Seven days later.She woke up.
She called upon Arief in mild voice "Da.Are you ok"
"I am all fine dear.How are you feeling now".
She said "I want to rest on your lap forever da".
He said "Does it hurt too much dear"
She said "Ila vae illa da..you saw naa i was all standing firmly after that"
He immediately hugged her tightly and cant control his tears.
He saw the fear on her eyes.Fear of death.
He know him.The guy who shot her.He was his good old friend for more than a decade now.
All those barbaric instincts have blindfolded him from distinguishing his own friends girl.
A year back when Arief and Sukanya decided to marry they said "No religion we will follow.No one can seperate us".
They never knew that these practices are deeprooted that they will follow them till the end.
Or end them in between.
18 comments:
wow...awesome as usual..
hats off logic!!!
nice one...
Logic, serious-a solren, niraya weeks stories with twists padichittena, so I was reading this with an anticipation of a twist at the end :)) Aana oru kadhai direct-a mudiyardhe twist madhiri aayiduchu! Good one!
And one more thing, logic controller solradhellam points to be taken dhan...aana sometimes romba careful-a irundhomna imagination thread light-a deviate aayidum..so balance pannikonga :)
@sophie:
thanx a lot
@kutti:
thanx da kutti.
@Logic controller:
yarupa ithu!!!
Do i know you?
Thanx for the grammatical corrections.Implemented some of them.
Send in your email id and i shall get all my future posts corrected from you.
Tht was 2 gud.. Keep writing.
That was good! Every single day thousands die becus of religion....Nice humane touch to such stoires we see in the news!
Nice one....
Bombay padam paartha effect varudhae...
I saw it inpersonal when there is a regionl riot in Coimbatore.. damn... I feel bad everytime I thing of it..
super da..nicely expressed..hate religious riots..!!..
yaaru da antha "logic controller"..englipish la masters panni irrupanga polla irukku!!!..lol
Right. Nice.
You should probably write scripts for movies ;--)
Nice narration. It captured the moment the bullet hit her...sometimes life does move in slow-motion...
"They never knew that these practices are deeprooted"
unfortunately they are still...da
Good narration da... The first two paras are news to me..
Keep blogging good things da..
well as SK tells..y don't to try da..u already have a near script ;)
and Yaarupaa athu logic controller....English vaathiyaaraa irukumo?
Logic,
Great that u considered my suggestions.
You must try your hand in technical
writing too.
Blogging is a good feeling
"its expressing known feelings
to people unknown,so we get
to know them better"
Happy blogging..
@ponnarasi:
thanx and sure will continue.
@kirukal:
thanx y no new posts on u r page
@neighbour:
bombay may be!!
@mytery:
thanx..ha ha ..logic controller dont know who is that.Strange.
@veda,
good timing shot nnu sollringala..thanx
@SK:
have some scripts ready..
@shilpa:
thankx..yeah in life some times are indeed in slow motion
@dakalti:
thanks da..first paras yes i too read it somehwere..was very interesting.
machi naam ascripta pathi than unnaku theriyumay da..oru nalla tune podarana poda mataingara..
@logic controller:
You dont have a blog on your own is it?
Logic,
Not yet..
I think i will start blogging
when i fall in love..that would be interesting,isn't it?
do you all think i'm a grammar teacher..?
ok..then students those who want ur blogs corrected raise ur hands..
Hi, You are tagged. Pls check out my blog to know more.. Will be happy to see if u write ur tag.
aabba... en ivalo senti.. super aahh highly romantic aah oru story ezhuthungalen..
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