Monday, December 31, 2012

irreversible deed,deal it forward


Dec 31st 12:00 PM : Mumbai Satrasta

Loud crackers blasted the streets and drunk people riding on bikes wishing "Happy New year 2013" to all brothers and sisters.
On the other side of the street was a silent group marching with candles with banners reading
"Let this year bring peace and protect womanhood from rapist brutes""RIP : Madhumita"
Few yards away.Nivedh jumped from 15 ft tall wall and in the course bruised his knees.He started to limp faster and looked moonstruck.
People ran hollering looking at him,he was confused and took few seconds to realize that he is still carrying the handgun.
Without further thougths shed it in a nearby trash tank and commingled away in to the celebrating crowd.

Dec 31st 11:40 PM : Mumbai Central Prison

"Kamal take him to cell 423" Ordered the Jail Officer

"What made you to give up" paused and said "Scared of us you rascal"  asked with a raised voice Kamal (sub inspector) coercing  him through the prison hallway 423 where rest of the accused were prisoned in.
He stammered and his mouth mumbled "Sir.I was scared to death."
Kamal with a wicked smile added "So you thought prison-cell would be the best place for you hide,then you are appallingly mistaken Rascals how dare you did that..",he continued to squall at him with gross words
They went near the cell where the other four accused where jailed in.Kamal pulled his key bunch to open the cell when he said to the inmates
"Here" paused Kamal and added "You partner in crime".
"What,he is not one of us,he was her friend,yeah" said one of the accused.
Before Kamal could realize on the happening, he was hit hard back in his head
Nivedh took the handgun out and snatched the key bunch.
Four of the inmates pleaded "please.dont ..dont.."
His mind was constantly playing back the last few pleading voice of Madhumitha
"Please leave me alone.Someone please help.Nivedh wake up..wakeup".
He started shooting at them randomly and mostly targetted below their abdomen ,he missed few shots,that hit other places including ears and the eyes.
423 soon turned bloodshed
More police men came running hearing the gun shot, when he fled out using the key that he pulled from the inspector.


Dec 31st 11:09 PM

Television was screaming loud
"Whole nation is on the rage of the Mumbai Rape at theatre.Protests were so high that New year celebrations in the city hotels/banquet joints have been cancelled.Police are still searching for the fifth accused.No clue have been found yet.Now live from the streets"
People started shouting "Kill them all", one said "Hang them" and few said "Hand them over to us we will take care".."Stone them to death"

He shutoff the television.
He cried out loud "Oh god,what have i done" and was trembling ,he thought the best for him at this point is to go handover himself.Decided and headed towards Mumbai central prison.
The gate was wide opened and no one was around at this time of night.
Suddenly he heard footsteps from the back and was above to turn back,in no time a huge stone hit his face hard it was, so hard that nose and lower upper jaw splayed.
Blood shattered and one more hit back of his head he whirled down and hit the floor.
"I know you will come.I have been waiting for hours here" said Nivedh and threw away the blood stained stone and walked towards the Prison office.


Dec 31st 7:00 AM

A foggy morning and the news paper boy tossed the days paper over the gate and it landed at the door step

The Hindu front page read
"Gang rape victim Madhumitha died at the hospital as the treatment went invain.Doctors said she had serious injuries in her abdomen that caused renal failure.Earlier Peeshar and his friends allegedly taunted the girl, when she was at the movie theater with her boy friend,asking her why she was out late with a man.Her friend, who works for a software firm, intervened. The men turned on him with an fire extinguisher. The girl then tried to protect her friend,infuriating the assaulters. First, they hit her. Then they pulled her to the theatre restroom and raped her.Mumbai police arrested four of the accusedc nd the search is on to find the one accused missing.Also reports say that the boy friend of the victim is also missing post the incident."

Dec 29th 6:00 PM

"No.Am not coming this time.I told you dear,unless you speak to your parents about our marriage,we are not having fun" said Nivedh
over the phone and he tried to be serious
"Jaanu,please,please this year is gonna end in two days,please,please.I swear am planning to talk to ma,papa this new years eve.This time for sure.I swear.I have plans to win over them." convincingly spoke Madhumitha
"No am not beliving this" said him
"Ok" paused she and said in scoring voice "How about a kiss"
Silence and she knew he was framed in.
"Hmmm,this is the last time i am believing you" said he and added "Ok where are we going,your choice hon" he offered.
"8 PM.  New Shireen Cinema.I booked the tickets already.Ranbir Movie yaar.." excited Madhumita
"Ok see you then.But remember this is the last time am coming out with you" said Nivedh

13 comments:

dakaltiz said...

It is probably the worst end to a year for India after the Tsumani havoc for India.

Not sure how Justice will be served to those maniacs ...but you have captured the emotions and nailed it out in this blog..."Nivedh" is all the people who are protesting against this brutal act and given a chance I'm sure the gun would be aimed below abdomen!!!

Apt one to end the year da...but one thing is for sure....this cannot be enjoyed when read with the current favorite number melodizing

Here is wishing a changed World with less crimes than the previous years.

Let 2013 be Blessed!

Ramesh said...

ulta vaa irundhadhalaa konjum kozhambittaen.. nice apt one to end of the year... i wish the same end comes to the 6 people arrested in connection to to amanat's case...

logic said...
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Danesh said...

Yes, they deserve the death penalty. The chronological style of relating events is nice and classy.

logic said...

Thanks Danesh welcome here been reading your page nice stuff!!

rudraprayaga said...

neat way of narration. Everything is on increase and so also crime. Reforms should occur in the beastly mind of the so called humans.

Preetika said...

My, what a post!!
Excellent narration and writing style :)
Great writing :)

Privy Trifles said...

It gave me goose bumps as I read this one...fabulously written. Kudos to your imagination!!

A very tragic year ending truly for us as a nation - am speechless about it!

logic said...

@rudraprayaga
Thanks for dropping by and the comment

@Ruya Preetika
You too have a nice blog out there.Thanks for dropping by

@Me:
Was waiting for you comments before i could move to a new post.:) Thanks

Privy Trifles said...

*honoured and touched*

Thanks :)

Waiting for your next post!

Dreamer said...

Nice one! specially the order of narration :)

Anonymous said...

excellently crafted, fast-paced, indeed. Conveyed the reflection asides the entangled narration!

Way to go buddy.

Karthik

Kavitha Jay said...

Ah..how did i miss this post?
Excellent narration..but its sad to think about all the crime happening in this world.
I guess once in a while we have to let the reality kick in.
-cheers