Saturday, October 07, 2006

A friend called "Dina" !!

That was a famous roof top cuisine in the city.Dinakar was waiting for someone on the corner most table.Privacy ruled there.
All of sudden "hey dins.." he heard a loud noice looked back and saw 6 girls all were his college mates.
"Oh shit.." he mumbled.

"What are u doing here da" asked one girl.
"illa chumma just like that.Felt alone" replied dinakar
"oh dear..shall i company you.." said one girl.
Second girl said "dai dai common enna dateaa.Who is that lucky girl.Dai your sweet mush.Million girls will fall for that mustache".
They all left the place.

Yes Dina and his moustache.What a virile look.Majestic!!!
He was so popular among the girls for his manly look with that moush on his face.He felt proud to maintain it.He loved it also.

There she came in.She was dressed like a angel.
Slim hips.Sexy lips.Came and sat before Dina.Perfumed the air around.

Dina said "Hey Nimmi"
she said "hey da dina"

"Waiter,coffee please" ordered Dina."Make one of it, more strong" added he.
He likes strong coffee.

"Ok Nirmala.Let me come to the point straight" cleared his throat

Nirmala interrupted and said,
"No.Dina i want to break it out.And i shud be always the first"
She looked.Her eyes oozed out the terrific desire.
She stood up.
Declared "We should never hide good things." and vented out
"Luv u da..luv u so so so much..i luv u and u r moooosssssh like anything"
She disaapeared the scene.

"Sir coffee.The one in the right is strong" said the waiter.
"haan..hmm..thanx" said Dina.He knew that coffee would never be strong concurring with the situation.

Dina reached hostel.It was raining heavily and he was fully drenched.
Madhavan came out with umbrella.Dina could see the tensity in his eyes.

Dina said "Madhava.Ava vendam da".
Madhavan "Enn da machi..enna achi..evalo tension you know..please tell me a good news"
Dina "Illa da.." tears rolled out of him.."she will never match u da..unaaku unaaku..a princess somewhere is waiting da "

Madhavan "enna da sonna ava..pls sollu da..wat ever it may be..she didnt like me is it?..am i looking that bad..tell me pls".
Dina saw the infantile,desperate,anxious Madhava.
Dina "illa da..hmm.hhmmm..she is in luv with someone else".

Silence.

They went to sleep after a very long discusion on the roof top.Dina never said a word of what happend there but convinced madhavan comprehensively.

Dina didnt sleep the whole night.He felt really bad for Madhavan.He was his close friend for the past decade.

Morning rays pierced the window and surfaced over Madhavan's face.He woke up.
Dina was not there.Madhavan dressed and went straight to canteen.

He saw Dina sitting in a distant table.He was sipping his morning strong coffee.
Two girls approched Madhavan and said "Your friend is bad"

Madhavan looked at dina as he lowered the coffee cup.His face was clean without moush.Madahvan never had clue why he did it.
He said to Dina "Machi.You look smart without moush man".

Dina smiled.He looked smart.Not because his face was clean but his heart was.
A heart filled with loads of love over his friends.

10 comments:

Kavitha Jay said...

yay..me first...
hello enna ithu..entha "dina" pathi ithu...;)...
enna real story ya..illa un imagintion aa...

DeeBaaBoo said...

Namba Dina va irundhaal..
kadal parisa indha "ottu" meesaya vechikko nu figure kitta koduthuiruppaan...Illa da Dina?

Krithika said...

OHhh!! it's beautiful!! ur writngs are so different...having a deep meaning and awesomely sensible! brilliant!!

dakaltiz said...

Machi...enne hero va pottu padam eduthiruka...epdi oduthunnu pakalam... ;)

@deebaaboo
Lolz da..that was a good 1..:)

DeeBaaBoo said...

Dei Dina,
Comments e varamaatengudhu..da..

logic said...

mystery:
kalakita..first comment i luv it..
ithu vandhu full karpanya no real incident

deebaaboo:
Amman da theva illa ma intha naay pera pottu padam edutha oothikichu

krithika:
thax much for u comments..

prithz said...

Awesome post!!! The reality of ur description was simply superb.. i have no words to describe how much i loved this post of urs..

And hey.. i did read the prev post.. sadly, i dunno y, but i didnt much follow wat was happenin.hence i didnt comment..

Harish said...

eppadi eppadi....chance a illa...
kalakitta po....

Unknown said...

sooper postu! Wonderful narration ba! :)

KC! said...

Really awesome!! Sema touching too!