Her thoughts preoccupied him.Its 5:30 Pm and she should be waiting for him.
"Excuse me sir..i need to leave now.I have an important personal work to attend" and he raised from the meeting as he spoke.
Took his bike and rode straight to the "Pleasant park".
The pleasant park is the back waters from the beach.
Its a place where the young couples share their pain,believes and the fear,
with the caring wind,
with the gentleness of the waves,
with the appease of the moon light.
They felt the gentle touches,smiles and confidents amongst them which reincarnates.
Parked the bike and walked thro the beach sand.Saw the couples.Most of them were dull.
Went straight to the pink painted view chair.Had a look at the chair.
Here is where he shared his everything with Sandhya.
Its now four years since he first met Sandhya.
Sandhya :
She is a typical example of complete womanhood.
Matured.Lovely.
She ensures he always follows the sweet rules that are enforced by her.
Dominant.And channelized every moment of his life.
She is a rare find for him.
He sat there and looked at the moon.It was a full moon day.
Waited there.
Closed his eyes for sometime and thought about the first day he met her.
Its in the college canteen.
He still reminded of the incident
He got a coffee turned and dashed agaist her.Spilt the coffee all over his shirt and her Salwar.
He smiled.
And remebered the day when he decided to propose her.
He ran behind her and fell down, the card from his hand opened up and every one walking read it.And he saw her face turning red.
He laughed.
"Dai anga paru..etho loosu" said a samosa selling guy.The other one near him said"Hey shut up.chi pavam da..his girl friend died in a road accident some six months back.From then he used to come here every week end and sit in that chair where they used to spend time.
Six months back,when he heard the news that she expired, he fainted and went into a state of prolonged unconsciousness.
After a month when he was back to normal, he never asked about Sandhya to anyone.And no one spoke about her to him.
His mind lost the capacitance to accept that she is dead. The deep burned memories made him to relive with her.
He still belived that she lives within him.He felt her in himself.Her soul had dissolved in him.
Her love on him won over the fate and lived even after death.
The same day ,same time last year she said...
"With the moon and the beach as witnesses here..I swear to god that i will never ever leave you alone in this world da dear............Never."
"Excuse me sir..i need to leave now.I have an important personal work to attend" and he raised from the meeting as he spoke.
Took his bike and rode straight to the "Pleasant park".
The pleasant park is the back waters from the beach.
Its a place where the young couples share their pain,believes and the fear,
with the caring wind,
with the gentleness of the waves,
with the appease of the moon light.
They felt the gentle touches,smiles and confidents amongst them which reincarnates.
Parked the bike and walked thro the beach sand.Saw the couples.Most of them were dull.
Went straight to the pink painted view chair.Had a look at the chair.
Here is where he shared his everything with Sandhya.
Its now four years since he first met Sandhya.
Sandhya :
She is a typical example of complete womanhood.
Matured.Lovely.
She ensures he always follows the sweet rules that are enforced by her.
Dominant.And channelized every moment of his life.
She is a rare find for him.
He sat there and looked at the moon.It was a full moon day.
Waited there.
Closed his eyes for sometime and thought about the first day he met her.
Its in the college canteen.
He still reminded of the incident
He got a coffee turned and dashed agaist her.Spilt the coffee all over his shirt and her Salwar.
He smiled.
And remebered the day when he decided to propose her.
He ran behind her and fell down, the card from his hand opened up and every one walking read it.And he saw her face turning red.
He laughed.
"Dai anga paru..etho loosu" said a samosa selling guy.The other one near him said"Hey shut up.chi pavam da..his girl friend died in a road accident some six months back.From then he used to come here every week end and sit in that chair where they used to spend time.
Six months back,when he heard the news that she expired, he fainted and went into a state of prolonged unconsciousness.
After a month when he was back to normal, he never asked about Sandhya to anyone.And no one spoke about her to him.
His mind lost the capacitance to accept that she is dead. The deep burned memories made him to relive with her.
He still belived that she lives within him.He felt her in himself.Her soul had dissolved in him.
Her love on him won over the fate and lived even after death.
The same day ,same time last year she said...
"With the moon and the beach as witnesses here..I swear to god that i will never ever leave you alone in this world da dear............Never."
15 comments:
hey me first
logic...its too mushy mushy...u killed her....u know in the morning my mood off...
cant sandhya come back?
hey 7G rainbow colony-a ulta panni pottutitaaaa...
nice one daa rajan. was too sentimental and heart wrackling....
yea..ramesh sonna maari..reminds me of 7G..
un peru Rajan aa :)..athukku logic eh nalla irrukku..hehe..kidding..
nice read after a long time..
Ooooops what abn irony...my god...i wrote a real story and here an imaginary one...but i like this ending...i really like it this post has to stay forever....even if sandya is dead...the love is immortal...god is not there in flesh and blood but we still believe him...so sandya..is not there in flesh and blood but still the memories are ever lasting...lovely story......liked it a lot....but WHAT A COINCIDENCE!HAAHHAAA HEAVEN SAKE DON'T REMOVE IT..PLEASE
7G ulta-naalum touching-a iruku..good one.
BTW, andha logic controller enga? romba naala kanom poliruku? ;)
Hmmm....feeling sad 4 him - to live w/o her. :(
Bayangra senti!!
Sophia:
am sorry if this turned ur mood off..i too was very much oof my moods when i wrote this
ramesh : thnaks da...yes it is the inspiration of 7G
mystery:
amma appa vecha peru matha mudiyathu maa..seri enna updatey kanum.
Shuba:
yes as u wish i wont delete this..but after reading u r poast i was all upset and thought everyone reading mine will have the same feel.
Usha:
thanks for the comments..
has to be me:
:-(
kirukal:
Hmm wanted to strongly convey the power of luv ..so no other way except this...
hmmm... but did you notice.. one thing... even after her death the guy remembers her and longs for her... ana there is no incidents of a gal waiting for the guy after hes dead... not even a myth...
so guys... open your eyes...
Ennul uditha suriyanae
Nam Kadhalin veppam pattri
Ni sambal aanayoo
Vennilavaai unnai parkindran...
En kaneeril un samabalai karaithu...
Idhu thampa yen manasukku thonithu.... orae feelinga pochuu!!! Kadahalai, cinimavula than pirikaranga...niyuma pa...
very sweet.. very touching! my my.. i hope this is just an imaginary story and no one is suffering like this.
Vishy:
appdaiya solra..
krk:
welcome here..awesome poem..will drop by ur page soon..
shree:
Thanks ma...ithu imaginary thann..nothing can seperate true divine lovers
enga tag??
long time no see?
Wow! Where do you get these ideas from? You simply rock.:))
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